Hi, I am helping a friend research paper who undergoes some depression and needs

Hi, I am helping a friend research paper who undergoes some depression and needs help with revisions or rewriting the paper. According to a plagiarism report tool, the paper right now is like most 50% copy-paste from the site or the source. This paper needs proper MLA citations from the source. The conclusion needs a new and better one as well.
I tried to revise the introduction. Please see check it as well for me.
Thank you so much!

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