This is a revision for an English course and it is very important as it needs to

This is a revision for an English course and it is very important as it needs to be submitted tonight. The professor wants to edit my exploratory narrative essay and here are his comments: I’m stopping. Claims of fact need a source cited. If you don’t use attributive tags, you need a parenthetical citation. Every claim. Every sentence containing a claim.
You don’t cite information from sources adequately in the one you posted.
And here are the instructions for the revision:
Use Word’s comment feature and include marginal notes for all revisions you make.
Do so by clicking on Review in the Word toolbar. Highlight what you want to comment on. Click on New Comment, and let me know what you worked on there.
For global revisions, supply a detailed comment at the beginning or end.
For merely mechanical (punctuation, including citations) or grammatical (appropriate words or word forms) changes, you want to highlight the change with that feature in Word: no comment is necessary.
I will attach the exploratory narrative essay below so you can edit the file properly. Please do your best because I need the points. Thanks!

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